Mozzaratti - Emergence (Hyoushi Remix)

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This is a song that took me about a week to finish. I tried to make a video showing the sequence. Didn't turn out too well... :)
Anyways, tell me what you think of it (I would really apperciate criticism as I am 13 with only 11 months of experience. ^_^)."